Looking for harsh opinions here! Where am I going wrong?
love you r work before i say anything else!
The close up of the eye... instantly Suarez, unmistakable. the others... looks goofy, kind of clueless, comic, inept? ( the caricature not your drawing)... part of his character (limited views ) is he is always scheming, working an angle... The eye portrays that for me, the other bits not so much. Would chop my hands off for your talent....ah.. that doesn't work does it! keep going you will crack it.