There is a good point in there somewhereI think. Its just hidden in the midst of attempts to be poetic and over sentimental rambling that would make an emo teenage girl cringe.
But Rawk like these sort of poetic ramblings.. If you don't make a point without starting "When I was fishing, down by the Wirral one summer's day, when I was a lad and the Sun was beaming golden, reflecting off of the Irish Sea"... etc, then it isn't a point worth making.