You made sense out of the post? Well done. I read it three times and gave up. Looked like a google translate job.
Thank you.
I've read it far more and believe it has possibilities.
However the internet is not conducive to crossings out and scribblings in and side of the page asteriskal improvements.
So I'm left with my original text.
Now you are a real writer, and I imagine you grew up writing, typing, your texts, and possibly - I would hope - still have original first drafts of some. And I know you like an ale so it also possible / probable / highly likely / indisputable that in those first thirsty drafts there are one or two sentences that sway the lines and drift off the path of your thought.
Out of real interest what is your favourite everday pen?
I loved uniball jetstreams, cheap, affordable, but now they are a onestop throwaway and I like refillables if possible.
Cos you are a writer, I bet you still use paper, that's why I am asking.