Lobo always makes my teams sound like San Marino Bobby told me that Bremner was a class holding midfielder when he needed to be and since he was around to see it unlike us non-grandpas I'll believe him.
You dont think Cech was better than Oblak?
Lauren was a regular for the Invincibles, won 2 league titles, 3 FA Cups and 2 AFCONs. Hakimi has looked good in a Dortmund team that didnt win anything, in a dominant Inter team with no competition and now at PSG where he doesn't look great. When he's played at a higher level in the CL he's not been anywhere near as productive, except at Dortmund where he was more often playing as a wide midfielder rather than a right back.
As for your midfield. All of the stat sites have Billy Bremner as a central midfielder who very rarely played as a defensive midfielder, and actually quite similar in terms of getting forward to Yaya Toure. So quite a lot of reliance on Modric, who whilst obviously a top class CM again isn't exactly a ball winner.
You've also left yourself very open to two very good wingers in Diaz and Ljungberg.
Don't take things so personally anyway, its just a draft
We all put our teams out there for a bit of criticism. You've put together a better team than you have before but its still not a great one.