Message is right, execution off. Agree.
Then it's a failure as a piece of communication. The execution is supposed to be an elegant expression of the strategy. Get the execution "off", then go home and explain to your client why you've pissed their money up the wall. Amateurs.
Don't worry Seamus, there are only ten of thousands of people hoping that you'll be super-fast learning on the job.
I got 52 secs in before I wanted to end it all due to how contrived it was. Get to the point.
Cutesy kid #1: Cuts? you mean like a knife?
Teacher: Yes, exactly like a knife. Theresa May would like to take that knife and stab you through the heart as she thinks you're a burden on the taxpayer.
Cutesy kid #2: Wouldn't that mean we're all dead?
Teacher: Yes. You're all poor and therefore worthless, Welcome to Caring Conservatism.